Sunday, 20 November 2011

What is LoVE



Love is like a taxi.
The one you wait for never comes.

Love is like chewing gum.
It eventually becomes a habit.

Love is like comparing two watches.
You will never know which is more accurate.

Love is like a rubber band pulled by two people.
The injured is the one who was reluctant to let go.

Love is like a cup of coffee.
The smell of incense is always better than to drink.

Love is like eating.
You eat a lot when you are hungry, but you vomit when you are full.

Love is like drinking tea.
The actual tea gets poured away, but you never admit to drinking water. Instead, we brag about how valuable the tea was.

Love is like the piano.
The most elegant of the content is placed in the most elegant people's home, but the real artists could not afford to play.

Love is like a crystal.
Looks beautiful but easy to break.

Love is like a dream.
There is always a day that you have to wake up.



19 评论:

Maggielf said...

Like is like everything.
Haha~~
I like the last one.
Love is like a dream which is fate:)

Joanna Li said...

I like these comparisons!!!Especially the "Love is like a rubber band pulled by two people.The injured is the one who was reluctant to let go." That is truth of how people get hurt by love.

katrina said...

Such a simple and pellucid poem. I like it~

Henry Duan said...

I like how you discribed love using everyday objects

Rex_Xu said...

I like the first one:love is like a taxi.Like what you always did in Beijin.

mike lin said...

nice picture. it is suitable for the poem. and lots of imformations in poem

Seanbai118 said...

Your analogies are very creative and accurate

Madelaine Li said...

I like how your poem uses a lot of comparison. That makes the poem very touching and vivid! I liked your crystal comparison especially. It's very true and deep.

HaoW said...

love is like a taxi what a nice comparison

jelina^^ said...

I like how you used many different creative comparisons to describe love. Good job~

Anonymous said...

GOOD POEM! A LOT OF SIMILES!

Anonymous said...

I like the way you describe love.

Anonymous said...

Great Poem!!! I liked it so much!

SP said...

Wow, great comparisons! I was trying to pick one that held most true and creative for me, but they're all so well thought of:) Good job

-Sunmi P.

Lisadong said...

I like you poem, especially the picture. You well explained what is love. It impressed me.

Anonymous said...

I like how every "like" is used very simply. Good comparisons.

Henry Duan said...

Your poem makes it look like love is everywhere. Very well done.

Henry Duan said...

Your poem makes it look like love is everywhere. Very well done.





Selina Liu

Ms. K. said...

I think you should change your settings (Language) to English instead of Chinese. If you don't know how to do this, ask me. It makes it difficult for English speakers to find your comments section.
I think this poem was thoughtful and the use of comparisons was interesting. You chose some unique concepts to compare with love. Continue working on making sure your expression is clear by editing for grammatical and mechanical errors as it helps us understand your ideas better.

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